This is something Marie Sexton is nudging me to do. In her words: “Each Saturday (or at least, on the weeks I remember), I’ll post a snarky comment from one of my books. Readers, at the bottom of the post you will (hopefully) find a list of links to snarky comments at other authors’ sites. Follow along. Comment often!”
She did snark from Cole. I, of course, must do Randy.
At first Ethan had no idea how he was supposed to distinguish between one “shitload of lights” and another, but then he saw the glittering, golden galaxy of lights at the other end of their path. Of course, it was difficult to distinguish it from all the other garish displays.
Ethan shook his head. “This place is just insane. The energy you must waste.”
“Yeah, we’re real low on yurts around here.” Randy gestured to the panorama of decadence around them, of lights and shops and people, half of them drunk, all of them laughing and talking and saoking in the dizzy madness that was the city. “Isn’t it gorgeous?”
Check out the other Saturday Snarkers here:
Authors, if you play along and I don’t list you, say so in the comments.